Feedback on Falling
I’m in the early stages of editing Falling and so you’re input is extremely valuable to me.
I value all of your opinions. Having said this, there are many aspects that will appeal to some and not others but there are also likely to be things that trip the reader up or dispel the suspension of disbelief that is so crucial to story telling. It’s these things that I’m particularly interested to hear about.
These questions may help you but don’t feel restricted by them.
Was it just too long?
Where did it drag for you?
Where certain characters or events unbelievable?
What annoyed you?
What did you find disturbing?
What made you think?
Did anything modify your thinking?
Did you find the way the book ended frustrating?
Were there chapters or sections that you felt we could have done without?
Here’s a pdf showing the structure of the book and the content of each chapter. You might find in helpful in addressing some of these questions.
Please contribute as much or as little as you like; it’s all appreciated and negative feedback is, in many ways, more useful than accolades.